Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
A/N: In Being Nick Barkley I took a look at one day in the life of my favorite dark-haired hazel-eyed rancher, that made me wonder what a day of the other Barkleys were like. Here is my look at...
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I am thoroughly enjoying your take on Heath's early weeks as a Barkley. Hurry back.
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I like it already!! I thought I was at the breakfast table with the family!Lisa
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
Very nice warm family scene at the breakfast table, but I can understand Heath feeling somewhat left out. You have to admire his courage to just appear and move in with a family that didn't know about...
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
interesting... Nick acts like Heath has all the answers he does but he wishes to make Nick think he does not LOL I cant wait to see how Heath finds himself in this new family and to see it that in...
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
The younger man closed his eyes and tried to remain calm, this continual changing of the work schedule was getting to him. I thought you wanted me to go over to McCanns and collect his herd?Loved that...
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This is GREAT, Laura!! Your characters are wonderfully captured!! Sarah
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
Excellent beginning! I could picture these scenes clearly. Hurry back with more.
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
I have a guess about the paperwork but I'm stumped on the sick calf.Could someone pass the scrambled eggs, please?
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
Laura - I can't wait for you to continue the story. It certainly must have taken time for Heath/family to bond and we're going to be there for it. Btw special request - next time Heath changes his...
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
I read this yesterday, but didn't have time to comment, so here goes.I enjoyed reading it. I liked the premise of exploring the early relationship between Nick and Heath. I found it interesting how...
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
Love it Laura such a wonderful insight into ordinary life for the family. Heath Barkley had lived at the Stockton ranch now for two weeks. Two weeks during which he had butted heads on almost daily...
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
There it was again, Heath thought, everyone knows what Im going to be doing except me.Becoming a Barkley couldn't have been an easy, overnight thing. Worthwhile, certainly, but not without struggles....
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
Nice start Laura, I can feel the tension as the two middle brothers try to find their way with each other. I can see Heath's jaw muscles trying to keep his temper from matching Nick's! More please,...
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
Like Heath, I'm wondering if Nick's question about the sick calf is a test?? Does Nick already KNOW what's wrong, and is only trying to show his superiority?? I love stories about Heath's early days...
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
This was a great start to the story, Laura. I enjoy Heath's early days with the Barkley's. Your portrayal of Heath's uncertainty and the tension between Nick and Heath was perfect. Please hurry back...
View ArticleRe: Becoming Heath Barkley - Dawn
Always love stories about Heath's early days with the family - can never get enough of them and this promises to be a good one. Looking forward to more!
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